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I don't really know how much of a beginner I really am, but this is the first website that I really put some thought into. The others were just scripted messes from bits and pieces I learned from page sources. I want to know what you guys think and see what I can possibly improve upon.

The link is here: http://spleet.googlepages.com

Please be honest, but don't be a dick about it.
08.04.06 01:44
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well spleet, i like it, and it kinda hurts that it looks better than my company's.
im good at code and all that, you look like your good a color and layout, we should make a team, yes?
08.04.06 02:20
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Wow. That's amazing.

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Please don't tell me that was sarcasm. Cause I asked for you to be honest.
08.04.06 04:59
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Quoted :: Spleet

Please don't tell me that was sarcasm. Cause I asked for you to be honest.


what, you've been bashed alot when you were a kid?
it looks great
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Not bashed, at least I dont think.. But there has to be room for improvement, there always is.. I'll bet if []HarrY reads this thread he'll point out some things for improvement.
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Once you get past the rather cheap (and pointless) introduction page, the design isn't that bad, although the banner is way too wide and creates a horizontal scroll bar.

There is little contrast between the text colour in the menu and the background colour of that side bit.

All Times New Roman should die.

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It's a very good start, but the intro page is a bit pointless.

There isn't much more to say after what Pope said. Just needs more contrast between things.

and yes, times new roman must die.

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You could make the main boxes wider, there's room to make them wider. But only if you want to.

Also, as Pope said, the image at the top creates a horizontal bar.

The site looks very good though, very little room for improvement.

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2 things:
1)Where is this Times New Roman you speak of?
2)The "pointless" intro page is there because Google will not let you delete the default homepage, and the default home page has to be made using one of there color templates. So until they have a completely plain page template for only html purposes, it will have to stay. :/
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ok, people here like verdana- see the difference-
times new roman****verdana

this can simply be achieved by...
body font="verdana"
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The only Times i see is for the

"Site Best Viewed at 1024x768 in Mozilla Firefox"

If there is any more, i'd like it to be pointed out to me please.

Edit: Found it, on the contact and about pages.
(I do need glasses but refuse to wear them.)
If you find any more, lemme know
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Geez Spleet I think you spelt "Space" wrong...

Joking, joking.

Looks great in my opinion, I like the black colour-scheme. Though as time goes on you should add more designs, like BTP.

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Nice start. I think the menu and body needs to be separated by a black/dark border tho.

Also:
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I got a haircut yesterday, and I recieved 2 compliments, and 3 "it shoulda' been shorter in the back" remarks. But, I like it, my hair needed to be shorter anyway, that is if i want to get accepted for a job. Can't have hippy-ish hair when applying, thats for sure. There has been some good things happening in my life, aside from the History test I completely bombed. I got a new shirt scheduled for delivery tomorrow, and a nice, new hoodie came in on tuesday. So, thats pretty much all thats been happening. There will be more posts, but not today.. heh, thats what a blog is for!
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So you have a mullet? That could be why people are commenting that. People tend not to like mullets.
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No, i do not have a mullet. It was very long, and hippy-ish, but now its all shorter. But the back is a tad longer than the front. Besides, i couln't pull of the 1337ness of having a mullet, ;)
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